You should show a little support for our slating.

You might want to do a bit of research before lumping everyone into the same category. For example, Dream Phoenix has been helping out with the character biographies, and Mr. Spencer helped out with the Umbrella mixup. Yama gave jordan the go-ahead for the game, and on the first Biohaze game thread, there was a lot of help being given. And sarcasm, can't forget that.

And I can't remember much else. Hurrah!

So next time, think before raging.

I may not be able to write decent zombie stories... but i more than make up for it in other areas... as seen here http://www.silenthillforum.com/viewtopi ... =9&t=22540

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"Heres a story i wrote in class out of boredom... it spawned from a sentence "The Boy Walked To The Store." in a book I was reading....

Jordan looked around as he walked into the old supermarket. He then doubled over in pain as his head started pounding and sirens started blaring… The dilapidated tile floor started disintegrating revealing rusted steel grating underneath, Blood and rust started to cover the walls, then a smell hit Jordan… a smell as pungent as the fog… It was a distinct aroma of rotting flesh. He nearly fainted from the smell as the pain subsided in his head… Just then the sound of static suddenly cut through the Perpetual Silence, His small pocket mp3 player was going nuts as he crept forward ever so slowly… He gripped the steel pipe he picked up back at Brook haven hospital as something moved in the shadows. Jordan then turned towards the direction of the disturbance and turned his flashlight on… There he saw one of the most Grotesque Abominations he has ever seen in his entire life. The creature was roughly his size, its skin was wrapped around its torso in a way that makes it look like it is in a strait jacket, its face was also covered by its skin and the way it screeched sent shivers down His spine… Jordan quickly jumped to the left as the Monster spewed forth acid from its body and he brought the steel pipe down where the monsters shoulder was supposed to be… *CRACK* Jordan swung the pipe again as the monster howled in pain… *CRACK* *CRACK* *CRACK* He Repeatedly smashed the steel pipe into the creatures skull until the creature crumpled onto the floor in a bloody mess… Suddenly the wail of sirens was heard again as Jordan fell to the floor clutched his head in pain. The world seemed to change around him, Tiled flooring started to cover the rusted steel grating, The blood and rust on the walls started to dissolve, Light started to shine through the perpetual darkness, and the smell faded along with the grotesque and bloody heap that once belonged to a monster… as the pain subsided and the sirens stopped, He found himself lying on the dilapidated tile floor in a normal supermarket… it looked nothing like the hell he was just apart of no less than 5 minutes ago. Jordan left the store to continue his search for his younger brother. Vowing to never return to silent hill after this whole ordeal is over…."

Crock of shite. Would look *CRACK* on live journal.

................. For fucks sake!!

Thing is, I've been more than happy to provide help as have a few others on here. It just sounds like he's sacrificing a coherent plot for the sake of something fancy, throwing in names and groups just because they sound 'cool'. Have a basic plot that makes sense before you start adding in organisations left, right and centre.

Also in regards to that extract, do you have proper paragraphs? Incorrect use of capital letters, punctuation and grammar. The United States is an English speaking country yet you don't know how to utilise the language, and before anyone asks, yes I say the same about this country.

Yes i know I have poor use of grammer and Punctuation... English was not my first language... i remember having to go to speech class on top of every other class when i was in Elementary school... anyway heres my original story for the game: "The year is 2011... Era city is a Former Amercian Town in Texas that has Succeded from the USA and Became an Independant Country about a month before the Raccoon City Revival Process was activated by a man known as Mr. Spencer... Due to the fact that Era city is no longer part of america, and that it is in such a Key Location. Many Foreign Governments are sending out troops to try to take control of the city... Due to that fact, America can not Luanch the Contengiency plan akin to the 1998 bombing of Raccoon City because of the fear of causing an International Incident."
It sucks but it makes sense..

America can't Luanch :(

Let me tell you where I am. I'm out.

Of course they can....


I was actually thinking about making 2 different versions... one with my idea and one with everyones ideas...